Today's challenge on Month of Poetry was to write a multi-verse haiku series retelling a fairytale. We were encouraged to take on Rapunzel, but I decided instead to address Cinderella. This is the result.
my story begins
with the trope of the absent -
or, in this case, dead -
mother. I, the babe
left behind; hapless father
sought a replacement
which, as it turned out,
was not the happiest of
decisions for me
although it is still
not clear, to me, why anyone
would hate a baby
I did not ask to
be prettier than they are
or cleverer; why
should her resentment
of my moony skin
my honeyed silk hair
force me to my knees
scrubbing stones in dark silence -
is this not my house?
of course, it all changed
when my godmother, she
of the wild magic
befrilled me for the
ball; riding in a pumpkin
is something to try
here is a strange thing -
my stepsisters, I saw then,
are not quite ugly
just plain, in fact, and
perfectly able, left alone,
to find rich owners
but she wanted more
she wanted to sell to the
highest possible
disturbing, really,
how much of a commodity
even beloved
girls become. I
danced strategically, of course,
I spotted the prize
marriage is better
than cleaning toilets for free
(mostly, anyway)
and if you wondered -
yes, I got my house back again
rank has privileges
and my stepsisters
are quite pleasant, now, wedded
to a baker, floury
and sweet, in one case,
and off travelling the world,
as an acrobat
in the other. I
have plans, for this ever after
I don’t aim to settle
for “happily”, when
that just means owned by some man
I’d rather “busy”
and “fierce”, and also “kind”
as I become the princess
of my own dreams.
- Kathy, 25/1/14
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